Wednesday, December 29, 2010

Peter & Mary Jane: (01) The First Encounter

OK, so this would be my first—well, technically not my first but it's the first time I got the guts to publish it so, yeah let's say it's my first—fan fiction. Even worse, it's actually a romance fan fiction, d'oh. But this couple is just appealing so I can't help to make it!

The concept is the mix of usual 'novel' style combined with script writing style. But the conversation written in the script writing style is all of Peter and Mary Jane. I also add some graphics to make it more interesting, and it was really hard since Andrew Garfield and Evan Rachel Wood were never in the same movie. But luckily I got some pics of their movie scenes that actually fit for each other.

And please pardon me if the story isn't as good as you expected, haha. My English is still sucky, but the more I read it at least you will understand what I'm trying to say perfectly. xoxo


01 : THE FIRST ENCOUNTER


INT. Night at the Parkers' house. 

(Song on the background: The Temper Trap "Sweet Disposition")


After having a date with Gwen Stacy, Peter finds that Aunt May is having a guest at the Parker's house. As Peter walks in he sees a girl in a perfectly slender body, wearing a quite fancy blue dress that looks nice combined with her long hair from the back. She walks out of the kitchen while Aunt May is right in front of her.

Aunt May realizes that her nephew is standing next to the couch at the living room. "Ah, you finally get home," says Aunt May. "It's Mary Jane, that nice Watson girl next door. She brought us a very delicious dinner," she continues.

"Oh, that's nice," Peter says.

"It's always nice to see a really good person comes here to comfort me, ever since I lost my husband," says Aunt May.

"You are never alone, Aunt May. I'm always here for you," Peter gives his aunt a hug. Mary Jane is picking her trench coat from the cupboard and wear it right away.

"Thank you darling for the dinner tonight," Aunt May walks toward her.

"No problem Aunt May. I loved to share it with you," Mary Jane replies. "I had a great time with you. I'll see you tomorrow," says Mary Jane.

"Say hi to Aunt Anna from me," Aunt May hands a box of cookies to Mary Jane.

"Thank you Aunt May, I will,". Mary Jane walks out of the dining room to the door. As she turns around, Peter finally sees her face. Their eyes meet. She smiles to him. There's nothing Peter can do except a very nervous gesture because he is simply stunned by her beauty. The worse thing is she can actually sense his nervous breakdown.

Mary Jane: "Face it, Tiger. You just hit the jackpot."
Peter: "Oh shit. She knows!"

Peter tries to say hi but not any single word can come out from his mouth. He can only look at her passing right through him to the door, while she confidently smiles at him.


MARY-JANE
Face it Tiger, you just hit the jackpot.

Peter chuckles to himself as he sees Mary Jane walks out and slam the door.